Sunday, June 27, 2010

Whisper in the Wind

I have started another book already. I have big plans for this one. I wrote a bit of it at first just to get started, and realized the ending was too predictable; so I wrote the ending already in hopes to change all that. Anyways I don't want to give away the story so I'm only going to post what I have wrote so far for the beginning!


Ethan leaned in and kissed me softly, I felt my heart actually melt that day; everyday since has felt like walking on air. The breeze blowing through my hair, I’m steady, sturdy, nothing can break me. I’ve been dating Ethan for seven months now, each one feels like a life time. I’m not sure I’ve ever been happier than I am now. He really, truly understand me, he’s very sweet and kind towards my feelings. It may seem crazy, or even too fast, but I love him, with all my heart. No one else makes me feel the way I do with Ethan, except for maybe…….


5 Months Later

“You know Ethan, if I’m such an inconvenience to you, why don’t you just leave already?”

“I never said you were an inconvenience, I said your new obsession with Aiden needs to stop. You can’t be with both of us, and lately it seems like you only want him. So choose, because I won’t wait around forever.”

Just hearing his name sends chills down my spine. The passionate heat I feel between us sparks, lighting flame upon my surroundings. Ethan’s accusations are true, I’m obsessed, but how could I not be? Aiden is the package deal; he’s got pale blue eyes that sparkle luring me in every time. His hair a dark brown, always swooped to the side; angled just above his eyes. He’s got the innocent, charming boy act, down to a T. I fall for it every time, but like a poisonous flower, he mustn’t be judged upon looks alone. He has a dark persona; he plays nice, gets you hooked, and breaks your heart. Truth is he’s not capable of loving anyone but himself; sometimes I wonder if he can even achieve that. Therefore he never gets attached and never has a reason to stick around.

“Fine Ethan! Just forget it; I think we need a break.”

“Okay, but so you know if you choose to do anything with Aiden during this time, were done, for good.”

I nod to show I understand, but I don’t really understand. How am I supposed to choose between them if I don’t know what it would be like to be with Aiden?

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